Reading progress update: I've read 4%.

Significance - Shelly Crane

Not like a girly wow-he’s-touching-me jolt. I mean an actual jolt. Like it felt as if fire was racing through my veins and I was standing in water with a blow dryer. My breaths ceased to exist and my blood felt cold in my hot skin. My eyes fluttered automatically at the pleasure pain of it.

 

Considering all the praising reviews of this book... Am I the only one who thinks this is really bad writing?