Reading progress update: I've read 8%.

Broken  - Kelly Elliott

I've read 6%.

 

"She jumped up and down and started clapping her hands together. “Oh my God, is there any way you can take me to a phone or to her house? I’ll pay you! I mean, with cash.”"

I'm honestly not sure which age group speaks like this, but none over fifteen, I'd say. At least I can say with certainty 24 year olds do not speak this way...

 

I've read 7%.

 

"I couldn’t believe I was trying to get to my first appointment with my first client on the back of a horse with a damn cowboy—and a smart-ass cowboy to top it off.

 

Wait until I tell Court about this. She would be pissed. My first official contact with a cowboy, and she wasn’t with me." (Whitley)


You serious? It sounds like she thinks of cowboys as a breed!

 

I've read 7%.

 

"His smile…good God, his smile. I swore my panties had combusted the moment he’d flashed that smile. Fucker had to have a dimple, too. Ugh." (Whitley)

 

Combusted? Suuuuuure. I can give you proof saying that's not possible in any way.

 

I've read 8%.

 

This is not coming along well. Whitley sounds like she'll have a TSTL moment soon. *facepalm*