I think it's safe to say I won't be able to finish this book. There are grammatical errors as well as truly awkward prose that takes the attention away from the story (which isn't going anywhere, it seems). Neither does the internal language Michael use match how he speaks.
On a different note: I've been quite busy in school (again!) but hope to get more reading done the coming weeks. We'll see how much this week though since my sister's home for the week and I'm hoping to spend as much time as possible with her since I won't see her until Christmas or so after she leaves at the end of this week. Anyway, hope you all have a good week!